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The graphs above show the average daily temperature in Hobart and Cairns. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

The graphs above show the average daily temperature in Hobart and Cairns. KyDN6
The two-line graphs above illustrate the weather average of daily temperature in Hobart TAS and Cairns QLD from January to December. Overall, it can be seen that the average temperature both high and low in Cairns QLD is higher than Hobart TAS throughout the period. The weather average of both cities fluctuated with the given period. According to Cairns QLD weather average chart, heat rise to 31 degrees in January which was then fluctuated and dropped to 26 degrees in June to August before increasing to 31 degrees from November. The low temperature of this place is about 24 degrees in January which decreased more in the following years and reached 17 degrees in July and August and it rose by 6 degrees in December. In terms of Hobart temperature, it has a high temperature is about 22 degrees where low is almost half of it at the beginning of the year. Both high and low temperatures dropped within the period and reached 12 degrees and 5 degrees in June and July. It increased again in the consecutive 5 months and pick to 21 degrees high and low remains half of it.
The two-line graphs above illustrate the weather
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of daily
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temperature
in Hobart TAS and Cairns QLD from January to December.

Overall
, it can be
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that the
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average
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temperature
both
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and
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in Cairns QLD is higher than Hobart TAS throughout the period. The weather
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of both cities fluctuated with the
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period.

According to Cairns QLD weather
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chart, heat rise to 31
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degrees
in January which was then fluctuated and dropped to 26
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degrees
in June to August
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increasing to 31
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degrees
from November. The
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low
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of this place is about 24
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degrees
in January which decreased more in the following years and reached 17
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in July and August and it rose by 6
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in December.

In terms of Hobart
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, it has a
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high
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temperature
is about 22
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degrees
where
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low
is almost half of it at the beginning of the year. Both
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and
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temperatures
dropped within the period and reached 12
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degrees
and 5
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degrees
in June and July. It increased again in the consecutive 5 months and pick to 21
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high
and
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remains half of it.

IELTS academic The graphs above show the average daily temperature in Hobart and Cairns.

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