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Noise complaints on five consumer goods from 1980 to 1996

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The given line graph illustrates the data about the citizens noise complanits for four sectors to Environmental Health authorities of Newtown from 1980 to 1996. Overall, the number of noise complaints of Road Works was in 1996 whereas the least complaints made Against Domestic at the same period. Noise allegations against roads works and traffic rose dramatically since 1988 while the domestic plummeted constantly over the period given. In terms of Road works, the number complaints was 500 in the begging which remained stable until 1984 and went down nearly to 390 in 1987 before rising up dramatically to 1200 in 1996. In case of Factories, the number of complaints was 400 in the starting then significantly grew up to 600 in 1982 and stayed firm till the end. In respect of Traffic noise, on the other hand, the allegations started from almost 250 and stayed fix till 1984 before went down to 200 in 1986. It rocketed by almost 400 Between 1988 and 1996. The complaints for noisr made by Democratic was about 630 in the first then fall down constantly till the end to 1996.
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noise
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complanits
for four sectors to Environmental Health authorities of
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Newtown
from 1980 to 1996.

Overall
, the number of
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noise
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complaints
of Road Works was in 1996 whereas the least
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complaints
made Against Domestic at the same period.
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Noise
allegations against roads works and traffic rose
dramatically
since 1988 while the domestic plummeted
constantly
over the period
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given
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In terms of Road works, the number
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complaints
was 500 in the begging which remained stable until 1984 and went down
nearly
to 390 in 1987
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before
rising up
dramatically
to 1200 in 1996. In case of Factories, the number of
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complaints
was 400 in the starting then
significantly
grew up to 600 in 1982 and stayed firm till the
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end
.

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respect of Traffic
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noise
,
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, the allegations
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started
from almost 250 and stayed
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fix
till 1984
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before
went down to 200 in 1986. It rocketed by almost 400 Between 1988 and 1996. The
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complaints
for
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noisr
made by Democratic was about 630 in the
first
then fall down
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till the
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to 1996.

IELTS academic Noise complaints on five consumer goods from 1980 to 1996

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187 words
6.0
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