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The line graph illustrates the proportion of the members who are women elected in European nations from 2000 to 2012

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The line graph illustrates how much fish and some other kinds of meat were consumed/ used/eaten per person in a country in Europe from 1979 to 2004. Overall, there was a decline in the amount of beef, lamb, and fish eaten, while the figure for chicken increased to surpass that of beef, making (chicken was increasingly used and became the most…) it the most consumed type of meat from 1989 onwards. The amount of beef eaten per person in the country examined started at about 220 grams, after which it saw fluctuations until 1989, before decreasing to end the period at around 100 grams. Conversely, the figure for chicken rose from merely under 150 grams per person(GPP) to north of 200 GPP in 1989 and kept rising to reach 250 GPP in the final year. 150 grams of lamb was used by an average person in the country mentioned in 1979, with a decline to approximately 75 GPP in 2004. Meanwhile, / in the meantime, the figure for fish decreased slightly from around 60 GPP to merely under 50 GPP after a few years and maintained at this level towards the end of the period.

The line graph illustrates how much fish and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other kinds of meat were consumed
/ This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
/eaten per person in a country in Europe from 1979 to 2004.

Overall
, there was a decline in the amount of beef, lamb, and fish eaten, while the figure for chicken increased to surpass that of beef, making (chicken was increasingly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 and became the most…) it the most consumed type of meat from 1989 onwards.

The amount of beef eaten per person in the country examined This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 at about 220 grams, after which it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 fluctuations until 1989, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 decreasing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 the period at around 100 grams.

Conversely
, the figure for chicken rose from merely
 under 150 grams per person(GPP) to north of 200 GPP in 1989 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 rising to reach 250 GPP in the final year.

150 grams of lamb was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by an average person in the country mentioned in 1979, with a decline to approximately 75 GPP in 2004. Meanwhile, / in the meantime, the figure for fish decreased slightly
 from around 60 GPP to merely
 under 50 GPP after a few years and maintained at this level towards the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. 