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Nitrogen is very important for the life on the earth. Over 90% of the earth's supply exists as a gas in the atmosphere. The diagram below describes the nitrogen cycle.

Nitrogen is very important for the life on the earth. Over 90% of the earth's supply exists as a gas in the atmosphere. The diagram below describes the nitrogen cycle. WqJeN
The diagram gives information about the nitrogen cycle. A very important is Nitrogen for the life on the earth. In the atmosphere, over 90% of the eath's exist as a gas. It can be obviously seen that the gas represents in a cycle diagram. In a rise of the diagram, we can clearly see the Gaseous nitrogen, the next is Fixation by lightning and the second point is Fixation by plants. Before all these things we are to see the Denitrification process. Earlier are Nitrate, Nitrite, Ammonium, etc. In the middle of the cycle diagram are located Decomposition and Protein. On the other hand, some processes have two ways to move. For instance, is that Nitrate, that leaves Fixation by lightning to Protein or Denitrification. The second example is Gaseous nitrogen, which goes to Fixation by lightning or Pixation by plants. It is obvious, that every process depends on the total. Any process to be coherent on the cycle diagram.
The diagram gives information about the nitrogen
cycle
. A
very
important
is Nitrogen for the life on the earth. In the atmosphere, over 90% of the
eath
's exist as a gas.

It can be
obviously
seen
that the gas represents in a
cycle
diagram. In a rise of the diagram, we can
clearly
see
the Gaseous nitrogen, the
next
is
Fixation
by lightning and the second point is
Fixation
by plants.
Before
all these things we are to
see
the Denitrification
process
. Earlier are Nitrate, Nitrite, Ammonium, etc. In the middle of the
cycle
diagram
are located
Decomposition and Protein.

On the other hand
,
some
processes
have two ways to
move
.
For instance
, is that Nitrate, that
leaves
Fixation
by lightning to Protein or Denitrification. The second example is Gaseous nitrogen, which goes to
Fixation
by lightning or
Pixation
by plants.

It is obvious, that every
process
depends on the total. Any
process
to be coherent on the
cycle
diagram.
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IELTS academic Nitrogen is very important for the life on the earth. Over 90% of the earth's supply exists as a gas in the atmosphere. The diagram below describes the nitrogen cycle.

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