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The bar chart below shows precipitation in hot desert grasslands in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information.

The bar chart below shows precipitation in hot desert grasslands in 1980 and 2000. paklm

The charts below represent the precipitation levels in hot desert climate grasslands in the years 1980 and 2000. The amount of precipitation is measured in millimeters for each month in the 2 years. Overall, it can be seen that there has been a significantly large amount of rainfall throughout the year in 1980, whereas the year 2000 has not received much rain. The trends of precipitation in both years have been quite erratic, with not much difference in the precipitation levels in 1980 as opposed to that in 2000, where there has been a drop in the level by the end of the year. It can be observed that in 1980, there was just over 250 mm of rainfall in the month of January, which slightly reduced to around 245 mm in February and then rose substantially to 325 mm in March. From this month, the amount of precipitation received by the greenlands has gradually decreased to just above 150 mm in July, post which the lands started to receive heavier rains till about 255 mm in November and the value remained almost stagnant till December of 1980. In the beginning of the year 2000, there has been 51 mm of precipitation, which reduced to 47 mm in the next 2 months and has remained the same until April. The value rebounded to its initial amount of 51 mm in May, and has continued to increase until August, albeit in a staggered manner, to 53 mm. There has been a dip in the precipitation level to 49 mm in September, after which it increased to 53 mm in November and then reduced back to its level in September, by the end of the year.

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levels
 in hot desert climate grasslands in the years 1980 and 2000. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrainfallsnowrainstormdrizzlesleet
precipitation
is measured
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month
 in the 2 years.

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seen
 that there has been a significantly
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amount
 of rainfall throughout the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 in 1980, whereas the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000 has not received much rain. The trends of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrainfallsnowrainstormdrizzlesleet
precipitation
 in both years have been quite erratic, with not much difference in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrainfallsnowrainstormdrizzlesleet
precipitation
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levels
 in 1980 as opposed to that in 2000, where there has been a drop in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
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end
 of the year.

It can be observed
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just
 over 250 mm of rainfall in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
 of January, which slightly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to around 245 mm in February and then rose substantially
 to 325 mm in March. From this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
month
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
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precipitation
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 has gradually
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started
 to receive heavier rains till about 255 mm in November and the value remained almost stagnant till When specifying a month and year, 'of' is unnecessary: "December 1980".December 1980
December of 1980
.

In the beginning of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2000, there has been 51 mm of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrainfallsnowrainstormdrizzlesleet
precipitation
, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 47 mm in the next
 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
months
 and has remained the same until April. The value rebounded to its initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadbulkextentsupplychunknumber
amount
 of 51 mm in May, and has continued to increase until August, albeit Consider replacing "in a staggered manner" with the adverb for "staggered"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a staggered manner
, to 53 mm. There has been a dip in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrainfallsnowrainstormdrizzlesleet
precipitation
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level
 to 49 mm in September, after which it increased to 53 mm in November and then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 back to its You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmatched
level
 in September, by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. 