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The bar chart below shows precipitation in hot desert grasslands in 1980 and 2000. Summarize the information.

The bar chart below shows precipitation in hot desert grasslands in 1980 and 2000. paklm
The charts below represent the precipitation levels in hot desert climate grasslands in the years 1980 and 2000. The amount of precipitation is measured in millimeters for each month in the 2 years. Overall, it can be seen that there has been a significantly large amount of rainfall throughout the year in 1980, whereas the year 2000 has not received much rain. The trends of precipitation in both years have been quite erratic, with not much difference in the precipitation levels in 1980 as opposed to that in 2000, where there has been a drop in the level by the end of the year. It can be observed that in 1980, there was just over 250 mm of rainfall in the month of January, which slightly reduced to around 245 mm in February and then rose substantially to 325 mm in March. From this month, the amount of precipitation received by the greenlands has gradually decreased to just above 150 mm in July, post which the lands started to receive heavier rains till about 255 mm in November and the value remained almost stagnant till December of 1980. In the beginning of the year 2000, there has been 51 mm of precipitation, which reduced to 47 mm in the next 2 months and has remained the same until April. The value rebounded to its initial amount of 51 mm in May, and has continued to increase until August, albeit in a staggered manner, to 53 mm. There has been a dip in the precipitation level to 49 mm in September, after which it increased to 53 mm in November and then reduced back to its level in September, by the end of the year.
The charts below represent the
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in hot desert climate grasslands in the years 1980 and 2000. The
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amount
of
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precipitation
is measured
in millimeters for each
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in the 2 years.

Overall
, it can be
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that there has been a
significantly
large
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amount
of rainfall throughout the
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year
in 1980, whereas the
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year
2000 has not received much rain. The trends of
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precipitation
in both years have been quite erratic, with not much difference in the
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precipitation
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levels
in 1980 as opposed to that in 2000, where there has been a drop in the
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level
by the
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end
of the year.

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be observed
that in 1980, there was
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just
over 250 mm of rainfall in the
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month
of January, which
slightly
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reduced
to around 245 mm in February and then rose
substantially
to 325 mm in March. From this
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, the
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amount
of
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precipitation
received by the
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greenlands
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gradually
decreased to
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above 150 mm in July, post which the lands
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to receive heavier rains till about 255 mm in November and the value remained almost stagnant till
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December of 1980
.

In the beginning of the
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2000, there has been 51 mm of
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, which
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reduced
to 47 mm in the
next
2
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months
and has remained the same until April. The value rebounded to its initial
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amount
of 51 mm in May, and has continued to increase until August, albeit
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in a staggered manner
, to 53 mm. There has been a dip in the
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level
to 49 mm in September, after which it increased to 53 mm in November and then
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reduced
back to its
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level
in September, by the
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end
of the
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year
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart below shows precipitation in hot desert grasslands in 1980 and 2000.

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