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the DIagram show the process of milk production

the DIagram show the process of milk production DYyGm

Given is a diagram depicting the procedure of milk manufacturing. It is evident from the information provided that there are 6 distinct phases involved, from initially collecting raw milk to end production by packing it into various containers for distribution. In terms of milk collection in the first stage, cows are placed in a cage called a milking machine twice a day. They are then forwarded into storage, where it is kept at an appropriate temperature prior to being transported by tanker into a specific diary. Following on from the previous section of the diagram, at the fourth stage of the process, milk is further divided into two categories of producing, which are then either pasteurized and packaged or used as the main ingredient in the production of dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter. In the final stage, milk and dairy products will be ultimately labeled then loaded and transported to retail shops such as supermarkets or grocery stores where they are ready to be sold.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 is a diagram depicting the procedure of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 manufacturing. It is evident from the information provided that there are 6 distinct phases involved, from initially
 collecting raw You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 production by packing it into various containers for distribution.

In terms of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 collection in the first
 stage, cows are placed
 in a cage called a milking machine twice a day. They are then forwarded into storage, where it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 at an appropriate temperature prior to being transported
 by tanker into a specific diary.

Following on from the previous section of the diagram, at the fourth stage of the process, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 is further
 divided into two categories of producing, which are then either pasteurized and packaged or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 as the main ingredient in the production of dairy products such as cheese, cream, and butter.

In the final stage, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 and dairy products will be ultimately
 labeled then loaded and transported to retail shops such as supermarkets or grocery stores where they are ready to be sold
. 