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The table compares the statistics given by United Nations about the social and economic indicators of four separate countries: Canada, Peru, Japan and Angola in 1994.

The table compares the statistics given by United Nations about the social and economic indicators of four separate countries: Canada, Peru, Japan and Angola in 1994. d36xo
The table compares the statistics given by United Nations about the social and economic indicators of four separate countries: Canada, Peru, Japan and Angola in 1994. According to the table, we can see that Canada and Japan are two countries that held the highest statistics of nearly all the indicators. While Angola had the most modest one. First of all, Japanese were paid with the highest income per year, followed closely by annual salaries that people who live in Canada received in 1994. However, the life expectancy and adult literacy rate of both two nations remained the same figures which was much higher than those of Peru and Angola. The number of calories that Canadian took in was a bit more than the Japanese, as well as the highest point of all nations (at 3326 calories per day). In contrast, the annual income per person of Peru and Angola was extremely low at 160 and 130 respectively. Then, we also can recognize that all aspects about social and economic indicators in the table of Angola were lower than those of Peru, as well as the smallest point in that comparison.
The table compares the statistics
given
by United Nations about the social and economic indicators of four separate countries: Canada, Peru, Japan and Angola in 1994. According to the table, we can
see
that Canada and Japan are two countries that held the highest statistics of
nearly
all the indicators.
While
Angola had the most modest one.
First of all
, Japanese
were paid
with the highest income per year, followed
closely
by annual salaries that
people
who
live
in Canada received in 1994.
However
, the life expectancy and adult literacy rate of both two nations remained the same figures which was much higher than those of Peru and Angola. The number of calories that Canadian took in was a bit more than the Japanese,
as well
as the highest point of all nations (at 3326 calories per day).
In contrast
, the annual income per person of Peru and Angola was
extremely
low at 160 and 130
respectively
. Then, we
also
can recognize that all aspects about social and economic indicators in the table of Angola were lower than those of Peru,
as well
as the smallest point in that comparison.
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IELTS academic The table compares the statistics given by United Nations about the social and economic indicators of four separate countries: Canada, Peru, Japan and Angola in 1994.

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