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The line graph compares the national spending of the US on five different categories of research since 1980 and 2008. It is noticeable that the spending on all categories increased during the period shown, except for Other. While the US spent more on Health research, General Science was spent the least In 1980, a total of nearly $16 billion was spent on Health and Other research. Whereas, the figures for Space and Energy were slightly lower, at $7 billion and $5 billion respectively, which was still double that of General Science However, during the next 20 years, while the amount of expenditure on General science rose gradually to $5 billion, that of other, space and energy fluctuated around $5 billion and $8 billion. In 2008, There was a significant growth in the expenditure on Health Research, reaching a peak of roughly $22 billion in 2004, before falling by $5 billion in 2008. At the same time, the US witnessed an increment in the spending on Space and energy, rising to nearly $10 billion and $7 billion respectively. By contrast, spending on Other research dropped steadily to $5 billion, which was the same as that of General Science.
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since 1980 and 2008. It is noticeable that the
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on all categories increased during the period shown,
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. While the US spent more on Health
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, General
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was spent
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Other
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. Whereas, the figures for Space and Energy were
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respectively
, which was
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Science
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, that of
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, space and energy fluctuated around $5
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and $8 billion.

In 2008, There was a significant growth in the expenditure on Health
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Research
, reaching a peak of roughly $22
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in 2004,
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in 2008. At the same time, the US witnessed an increment in the
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. By contrast,
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dropped
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IELTS academic national spending of the US

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