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map comparision of road accessibility in 2007 and 2010

map comparision of road accessibility in 2007 and 2010 7LQA6

The map displays a difference and an up-gradation of a city hospital's road accessibility from the years 2007 to 2010. Overall, the three main visible changes which can be observed directly are; a bus station, a separate public car parking, and two roundboats. In 2007, the hospital, which was located inside the ring road circle, had only one access via hospital road, and it was attached with city road on the second end site. Hospital road had 6 mini bus stops three on each side, and a common car park area for staff and public on north east side of the map. In 2010, the biggest change amongst all developments was, a common big bus station for public transportation towards west side of hospital road and the construction of two roundabout; one at the intersection of the road with ring aoad and the other at the intersection with the city road. The most useful change was an individual parking for public, it was towards East to the hospital, and for staff, it was opposite to a newly constructed public transport.

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road
 accessibility from the years 2007 to 2010.

Overall
, the three main visible This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 which can be observed
directly
 are; a bus station, a separate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 car parking, and two Possible spelling mistake found.round boats
roundboats
.

In 2007, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, which was located
 inside the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 circle, had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one access via You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
, and it

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was
 attached with city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 on the second This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 site. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
Hospital
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road
 had 6 mini Possible agreement error. The noun 'bus' seems to be countable, so consider using: "buses", "busses".busesbusses
bus
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
 three on each side, and a common car park area for staff and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 on This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 side of the map.

In 2010, the biggest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 amongst all developments was, a common This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 bus station for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 transportation towards west side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
 and the construction of two roundabout; one at the intersection of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 with ring Possible spelling mistake found.roadloadtoadgoadwoadAAD
aoad
 and the other at the intersection with the city road.

The most useful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 was an individual parking for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
, it was towards East to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
, and for staff, it was opposite to a newly
 constructed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withurbanmutualciviccivilnationalcommunal
public
 transport. 