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The graph and chart show the growth economy and government inestment.

The graph and chart show the growth economy and government inestment. qRd5a
The line graph noticeably depicts the information about the growth of economy in a nation whereas the pie chart illustrates the investment in various fields which was done by authorities. Having a keen glance at the line graph, it is manifested that the economy growth showed stagnation at the 500millions in1970. In 1990, the economy growth had been increased, it was accounted to 1000millions. Moreover, flchunation trend was followed by economy growth in 2010. Moving towards the pie chart, the highest percentage of investment on tourism. Along with this, the proportion of investment on textile decreased considerably by 5% as compared to oil &fuel. Furthermore, 30% investment in transport fields which was done by government. In the nutshell, it is restated that the maximum economy growth in 2010. However, the minimum percentage of investment on textile which has been done by government.
The line graph
noticeably
depicts the information about the
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growth
of
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economy
in a nation whereas the pie chart illustrates the
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investment
in various fields which
was done
by authorities. Having a keen glance at the line graph, it
is manifested
that the
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economy
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growth
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showed
stagnation at the 500millions in1970. In 1990, the
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economy
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growth
had
been increased
, it
was accounted
to 1000millions.
Moreover
,
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flchunation
trend
was followed
by
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economy
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growth
in 2010. Moving towards the pie chart, the highest percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
investment
on tourism. Along with this, the proportion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
investment
on textile decreased
considerably
by 5% as compared to oil
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&fuel
.
Furthermore
, 30%
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investment
in transport fields which
was done
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
. In the nutshell, it
is restated
that the maximum
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economy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
growth
in 2010.
However
, the minimum percentage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
investment
on textile which has
been done
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
.

IELTS academic The graph and chart show the growth economy and government inestment.

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