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The line and pie chart show that people are in need of electricity in the winter and Summer and the percent of spending on something in winter.

The line and pie chart show that people are in need of electricity in the winter and Summer and the percent of spending on something in winter. Bgn05
The line and pie chart show that people are in need of electricity in the winter and Summer and the percent of spending on something in winter. Overall we can see that more performance demand for electricity increases than summer's in the usual diary. The electricity is expanded by people for heating rooms and also heating water. In summer unit of electricity, that is, 20000 of the unit determines about it hasn't danger point than winter. This moving of line means that performance of electricity changes in the range 20000 and 10000. The unit of electricity in winter is in their range of 30000 and 40000 at the beginning. But this performance changed to 50000 units abruptly. The pie chart shows that a large amount of electricity spends on heating rooms and heating water. This performance is included 52. 5 percent. However, the population uses the same amount of electric tools and media techniques and also lighting. The kitchen technique possesses 17. 5 percent in winter.
The line and pie chart
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and Summer and the percent of spending on something in winter.

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see
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electricity
increases than summer's in the usual diary. The
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electricity
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people
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heating
rooms and
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heating
water.

In summer
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of
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electricity
,
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, 20000 of the
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unit
determines about it hasn't
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danger
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winter
. This moving of line means that
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performance
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electricity
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changes
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electricity
in
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winter
is in their range of 30000 and 40000 at the beginning.
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performance
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abruptly
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The pie chart
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spends on
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heating
rooms and
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heating
water. This
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performance
is included
52. 5 percent.
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, the population
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uses
the same amount of electric tools and media techniques and
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lighting. The kitchen technique possesses 17. 5 percent in
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winter
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IELTS academic The line and pie chart show that people are in need of electricity in the winter and Summer and the percent of spending on something in winter.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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