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The graphs below show the percentage of people born in Australia and out of Australia, living in cities, towns and rural areas.

The graphs below show the percentage of people born in Australia and out of Australia, living in cities, towns and rural areas. LB1g3
The given two bar charts compare the proportion of individuals born in Australia and outside Australia in cities, towns and villages from 1950 to 2010. The data has been calibrated in the percentage. Overall, it can be clearly seen that even though more non-native than native Australian lived in cities as compared to these two places throughout the period. From the first chart, it is evidently that in 1950, a little over a half native Australian and this figure increased slightly accounted for three- fifths non-native Australians lived in cities, which was two times more than towns and rural areas, while the percentage of people lived in towns was almost equal to a quarter whereas the ratio native and non-native Australians lived in villages which collected a fifth and a minority. Turning to the second chart, it can be vividly seen that there was a slow rise in that of both native and non-native Australians living in cities till 2010, after which the native Australia climbed from 55% to 63% respectively, whereas the non-native Australians grew to 60% to 70% orderly; however, town dwellers remained the same whilst those live in rural areas saw a decrease significant, with a fifth and a tiny above a tenth in the case of native Australians, and from 15% to 5% in the rest of non-native Australian.
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two bar charts compare the proportion of individuals born in Australia and outside Australia in
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cities
,
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towns
and villages from 1950 to 2010. The data has
been calibrated
in the percentage.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
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seen
that
even though
more
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non-native
than
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native
Australian
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lived
in
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cities
as compared to these two places throughout the period.

From the
first
chart, it is
evidently
that in 1950, a
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little
over a half
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native
Australian and this figure increased
slightly
accounted for three- fifths
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non-native
Australians
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lived
in
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cities
, which was two times more than
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towns
and rural areas, while the percentage of
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people
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lived
in
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towns
was almost equal to a quarter whereas the ratio
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native
and
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non-native
Australians
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lived
in villages which collected a fifth and a minority.

Turning to the second chart, it can be
vividly
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seen
that there was a slow rise in that of both
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native
and
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non-native
Australians living in
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cities
till 2010, after which the
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native
Australia climbed from 55% to 63%
respectively
, whereas the
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non-native
Australians grew to 60% to 70% orderly;
however
,
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town
dwellers remained the same whilst those
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live
in rural areas
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saw
a decrease significant, with a fifth and a tiny above a tenth in the case of
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native
Australians, and from 15% to 5% in the rest of
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non-native
Australian.
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