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Modern Forms Of Communication Such As Email And Messaging Have Reduced The Amount Of Time People Spend Seeing Their Friends. This Has Had A Negative Effect On Their Social Lives. To What Extent Do U Agree Or Disagree?

Modern Forms Of Communication Such As Email And Messaging Have Reduced The Amount Of Time People Spend Seeing Their Friends. This Has Had A Negative Effect On Their Social Lives. mYbr

The given bar charts illustrate the number of honey-bee colonies and the amount of honey production in the United States over the period of 40 years, starting from 1970. Overall, it is clear that there were a number of significant changes in the number of honey-bee and their production. Moreover, they both experienced a decrease trend over the last 20 years of the period shown. Between 1970 to 1990, the number of honey-bee colonies stood at 4 millions in 1970 before increasing slightly and reaching a peak of nearly 4. 2 millions in 1980 and decreasing quickly to 3. 5 millions in the next 10 years, 1990. While, the amount of honey production experienced a dramatic decrease of 20, 000 tonnes from 130, 000 tonnes in 1970 to 110, 000 tonnes in 1980, before recovering to 120, 000 tonnes in 1990. Over the following 20 years, both the number of honey-bee colonies and their production dropped constantly over the period. Honey-bee hives’s firuge decreased steadily, with the figure being at about 2. 5 millions in 2000 and continued to steadily fall before hitting a low of nearly 1. 8 millions. In the same period, the production of honey dropped sharly, after experiencing a quick decrease and being close to 100, 000 tonnes, the production of honey-bee’s figure fall constantly and hit a low of 60, 000 tonnes.

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 of 40 years, starting from 1970.

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Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "Between 1970 and 1990".Between 1970 and 1990
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 experienced a dramatic decrease of 20, 000 tonnes from 130, 000 tonnes in 1970 to 110, 000 tonnes in 1980, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
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1990.
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 of honey-bee colonies and their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
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 and hit a low of 60, 000 tonnes. 