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The table demonstrates the number of mobile devices of 5 various brands sold in millions, during the period from 2006 to 2012.

The table demonstrates the number of mobile devices of 5 various brands sold in millions, during the period from 2006 to 2012. pdJy

The table demonstrates the number of mobile devices of 5 various brands sold in millions, during the period from 2006 to 2012. The clearest trend visible is jump in sales of Samsung’s and Apple’s phones. Over the six year period, the number of cellphones made by Samsung increased dramatically, by almost 280 million. Sales peaked in 2012, when Samsung sold the highest number of mobile phones compared to other brands during the period shown. When in comes to Apple, considering the fact that their sales started in 2007, they plummeted and went from around 2 to almost 136 million devices sold in the final year. Nokia started with the most phones sold in the first year, and reached its highest point in 2008 when sales were 475 million. After that, it witnessed a steady decline. On the other hand, Motorola had no jumps in sales, as it experienced only decrease over the six year period, ending at 28 million phones sold, which was the lowest point. Ericsson’s sales fluctuated during the years, and ended at the same number as Motorola. In conclusion, it is evident that brands like Samsung and Apple gained their popularity during this time period, and the others like Motorola and Ericsson lost it. Customers’ loyalty to Nokia, however, was pretty much stable.

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In conclusion
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, and the others like Motorola and Ericsson lost it. Customers’ loyalty to Nokia, however
, was pretty much stable. 