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The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. 8Dgr
The three pie charts reveal the average percentages of sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar in the staple diet consumed in the USA. Interestingly, all these nutrients can wreak havoc on an individual’s health if consumed beyond a prescribed limit. On closer inspection, the data suggests that breakfast contains the lowest proportion of all three nutrients. Whereas, lunch and dinner have a higher concentration of sodium and saturated fat. Snacks, as expected, has more of added sugar than any other meal. Firstly, sodium constitutes 43 % of dinner and decreases to 23 % for lunch. Breakfast and snacks share the same amount of this nutrient; 14 % each. Secondly, saturated fat makes up 37 % of supper and 26 % of the mid-day meal, and this is closely followed by snacks or treats, which contribute 21 % of it. Surprisingly, breakfast is packed with merely 16 % of fat. Finally, sugar has the highest concentration in light meals; at a staggering 42 %. The evening meal adds another 23 %, followed by lunch and breakfast at 19 % and 16 %, respectively.
The three pie charts reveal the average percentages of sodium, saturated
fat
, and
added
sugar in the staple diet consumed in the USA.
Interestingly
, all these nutrients can wreak havoc on an individual’s health if consumed beyond a prescribed limit.

On closer inspection, the data suggests that
breakfast
contains the lowest proportion of all three nutrients. Whereas, lunch and dinner have a higher concentration of sodium and saturated
fat
. Snacks, as
expected
, has more of
added
sugar than any other meal.

Firstly
, sodium constitutes 43 % of dinner and decreases to 23 % for lunch.
Breakfast
and snacks share the same amount of this nutrient; 14 % each.
Secondly
, saturated
fat
makes
up 37 % of supper and 26 % of the mid-day meal, and this is
closely
followed by snacks or treats, which contribute 21 % of it.
Surprisingly
,
breakfast
is packed
with
merely
16 % of
fat
.

Finally
, sugar has the highest concentration in light meals; at a staggering 42 %. The evening meal
adds
another 23 %, followed by lunch and
breakfast
at 19 % and 16 %,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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