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the garphs abut post graduate and graduate student in uk

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The bar charts depict information regading graduate and postgraduate students in Britain who did not opt for a full-time job after completing their course in 2008. To sum up, the number of graduates were more than postgraduates, who excludes the option of full-time work. It is clearly visible that further education is the preferred option among post-graduate students, accounting for approximately 17735. Whereas, voluntary work is done by the least students with 3500 only. However, the remaining students do part-time jobs or stay unemployed with 17735 and 18235 respectively. Furthermore, postgraduate students show a similar trend. Further study is also chosen by the majority of students with roughly 2725. voluntary work was around 345, substantially the lowest participation as compared to other types. Part-time work was nearly 2535, which is the second most opted choice. Unemployment after ratio was 10% less in post graduate students as compared to gradutes.

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