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This report derives from a bar chart which illustrates the total time men and women spend performing six different chores around the house during the day. Overall, the males prefer gardening over any other task and dislike performing clothes washing more than any other task. Not only is this point clear, but also women utilize the most time for cooking, while maintenance is a job they spend the least amount of time acting on. Notably, women more than double the men in cooking with a 44 minute difference between the sexes. Additionally, observe how women execute the cleaning for about 45 minutes more than the men. Next with gardening, the men perform this for 49. 5 minutes, and the women conduct this activity for less than half that time. With the care of children, women far exceed the men in this area by 25 minutes each day. Besides this point, the men undertake maintenance almost three times more than women. On a final note of comparison, the females spend 25 minutes per day washing clothes, while men only use 2 minutes of their time on this duty.
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IELTS academic men and women time spending

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