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The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the household recycling mattrics in three various nations between the period 2005 and 2015. All in all, despite having a least percentage of recycle-able households in 2005, Germany is currently at the second place whereas, France which was at number one position in 2005 is in the last place at the moment. With respect to France's household recycling rate, all though there is a 10% decrease in the count in 2015 when compared to 2005 which was 50%, there was a terrific fall in 2013. The curve had gone down by 20% in 2013 and has been a slight raise since then. Germany and UK started off with 20% and around 35% respectively in 2005. Germany has witnessed a constant raise over the past 10 years whereas there are has been fluctuations in UK's recycling rates. UK stands first with around 60% while Germany secures a second place with a marginal difference of 5% when compared to UK's.
The line graph illustrates the household recycling
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mattrics
in three various nations between the period 2005 and 2015.

All in all, despite having
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a
least percentage of recycle-able households in 2005, Germany is
currently
at the second place whereas, France which was at number one position in 2005 is in the last place at the moment.

With respect to France's household recycling rate,
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all though
there is a 10% decrease in the count in 2015 when compared to 2005 which was 50%, there was a terrific fall in 2013. The curve had gone down by 20% in 2013 and has been a slight raise since then.

Germany and UK
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started
off with 20% and around 35%
respectively
in 2005. Germany has witnessed a constant raise over the past 10 years whereas there are has been fluctuations in UK's recycling rates. UK stands
first
with around 60% while Germany secures a second place with a marginal difference of 5% when compared to UK's.
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IELTS academic The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
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