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maps depict the dramatic developments that took place in a certain region over the course of five years starting from 2005

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The provided maps depict the dramatic developments that took place in a certain region over the course of five years starting from 2005. Overall, looking at the map it can be seen that the whole town underwent numerous changes with new additions of distinct amenities and the reuse of the train system. In 2005 the area witnessed a large space of empty land. There was a factory surrounded by heaps of trees in the North-West of the town. In the East of the factory was the farm and the church was in close proximity to the farm. The port was directly opposite the plan located in the West of the map. In this year, the railway was not in service which parallel to the main road ran along the town from the factory to the South-East and passed the gas station. There was a dining establishment situated halfway between the hotel and the petrol filling spot along the street leading to the factory. Furthermore, there were the existence of many trees dotted around on either side of the street and a bus station was roughly in the middle of the eateries. By 2010, all the aforementioned facilities still remained with the exception to the farm. After 5 years, the agriculture land was converted into a golf course. A new road leading to the golf field was erected and the abandoned railway was reopened to fulfill the citizen’s need. The bus stop had been relocated to the North of the town and the place served for parking taken its own place. While a hospital was established in the West of the car parking to improve the medical knowledge and to educate new generations of nurses and physicians. The most significant addition was the construction of a new train station in the North of the town and a number of trees was chopped down to make way for several public services.

The provided maps depict the dramatic developments that took place in a certain region over the course of five years starting from 2005.

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factory
. Furthermore
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 trees dotted around on either side of the street and a bus station was roughly in the middle of the eateries.

By 2010, all the aforementioned facilities still
 remained with the exception to the farm. After 5 years, the agriculture land was converted
 into a golf course. A You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 road leading to the golf field was erected
 and the abandoned railway was reopened
 to fulfill the citizen’s need. The bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
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 to the North of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
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 place. While a hospital was established
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improve
 the medical knowledge and to educate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
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 generations of nurses and physicians. The most significant addition was the construction of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 train station in the North of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and a number of trees was chopped
 down to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 way for several public services. 