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The given procedure covers the basics about how Australian Bureau of Meteorology receives nearly accurate information about weather reports for generating a trustworthy forecasts and how they were telecasted on the various media types. It is evident from the given diagram that, there are plethora of sources from where information is received in which the main source is satellite followed by radar and drifting buoy in the sea. First talking about satellite, it passes various satellite photos to Australian Bureau of Meteorology and analysts of the same organization are interpreting those images for the weather and forecasting and then precised reports are sent to headquarters of different media types such as TV, radio and recorded announcement. In addition, radar has big satellite dish and it collects signals from satellite on the radar screen and based on that reports are made for preparing the broadcast and then it broadcasts on the TV, radio or in the form of the recorded announcement. Furthermore, a synoptic chart is prepared via satellite through radar or drifting buoy and in the first situation, signals are collected from satellite to radar and this chart is made while, in the second situation, directly from drifting buoy a synoptic chart is prepared for the broadcasting. Hence, it can be said that through various medium Australian Bureau of Meteorology is able to prepare a up to minute weather report on order to produce reliable forecasts.

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