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the diagrams below show how humans and plants interact to produce oxygen and carbon dioxide

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The given diagrams represent what humans and plants can work together to manufacture oxygen and carbon dioxide It can be clearly seen that trees need enough nutrients for living activities, such as: sunlight, water, furtilisers. . . And these are following steps how oxygen and carbon dioxide are produced. Firstly, plants produce oxygen through photosynthesis by using the sunlight, absorb the carbon dioxide and evacuating the oxygen for breathing. Next, during the operation and production, humans and animals will imbibe oxygen, and emit CO2 back into the atmosphere. The tree will continue to absorb that co2 gas to get raw materials for the operation process. And it keeps repeating to form a cycle. Plants play an important in our life. All of things in the world are depending too much on the plants. So that, we should protect, take care them eveyday for the natural evolution.
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diagrams represent what humans and plants can work together to manufacture oxygen and carbon dioxide

It can be
clearly
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seen
that trees need
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enough
nutrients for living activities, such as: sunlight, water,
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furtilisers
.
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And these are following steps how oxygen and carbon dioxide
are produced
.
Firstly
, plants produce oxygen through photosynthesis by using the sunlight, absorb the carbon dioxide and evacuating the oxygen for breathing.
Next
, during the operation and production, humans and animals will imbibe oxygen, and emit CO2 back into the atmosphere. The tree will continue to absorb that co2 gas to
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get
raw materials for the operation process. And it
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keeps
repeating to form a cycle.

Plants play an
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important
in our life.
Consider using "All things" or "All of the things".
All of things
in the world
The verb 'depending' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are depending
too much on the plants.
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So
that, we should protect, take care them
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eveyday
for the natural evolution.

IELTS academic the diagrams below show how humans and plants interact to produce oxygen and carbon dioxide

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