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Table shows %of time spent on types of internet activity,by age group

Table shows %of time spent on types of internet activity, by age group r1jm2

The given table shows the age groups who spend their time on some sorts of internet activities. Percentages are taken as a measurement. Overall, playing games is the activity which the largest percentage of younger age groups spend most time on it while the lowest point of spending time on some internet activities on the table can be shown online shopping. More than half of 50 years old people prefer Browsing news sites and this measurement is also can be observed in teenagers'social networking time. Browsing sport sites is more preferable activity for 50 and older people compared to other rates and this group spend their less time on playing games than others do. Whereas, the adults' most time is spent on that. It can be found from this table that Browsing news sites is watched by exactly a third of the people who are between 40-49. There are some differences on spending time between social networking and Browsing sports sites in the group of 30-39 and for them shopping is most preferable they spend their less time on playing games (183words)

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