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The chart delineates the changes in Felix Stone in Uk during the period 1967 to 2001.

The chart delineates the changes in Felix Stone in Uk during the period 1967 to 2001. gY6K7
Overall, several large changes were made to the town throughout the years, including the addition of new tourism facilities, and the removal of previous industry and infrastructure. In 1967 at Felix Stone, , it can easily be seen that there used to be a large farmland next to the shop. However, it has been rebuilt after nearly four decades by a complex that includes a hotel, swimming pool, and tennis courts. While, to the left of the farmland, there were two shops separated by a high street. However, in 2001, one of each was replaced in the apartment. On the other hand, only the coffee shop and the dunes stayed in the same place after four decades. This town's seafront used to be home to a large marina and pier, but it was demolished and replaced with a public beach. Beside of that, a wind turbine facility has been built to the south of the dunes, and a carpark has been added to the beachfront hotel.
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, several large
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changes
were made
to the town throughout the years, including the addition of new tourism facilities, and the removal of previous industry and infrastructure. In 1967 at Felix Stone,
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it can
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be
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that there
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used
to be a large farmland
next
to the shop.
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, it has been rebuilt after
nearly
four decades by a complex that includes a hotel, swimming pool, and tennis courts. While, to the
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left
of the farmland, there were two shops separated by a high street.
However
, in 2001, one of each
was replaced
in the apartment.
On the other hand
,
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only
the coffee shop and the dunes stayed in the same place after four decades. This town's seafront
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used
to be home to a large marina and pier,
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but
it
was demolished
and replaced with a public beach. Beside of that, a wind turbine facility has
been built
to the south of the dunes, and a
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carpark
has been
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added
to the beachfront hotel.
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