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Map illustrates about Modification of consulting room during 2005 and now

Map illustrates about Modification of consulting room during 2005 and now PLER2

The information about modification in consulting firm during 2005 and now is depicted by the map. Overview, it is noticed that spectacular changes has been made for consultation room, however, the physiotherapy room remain unchanged. By analyzing the map it is clear that during 2005, parking space was for only 13 cars but after modifications now it is for 30 cars. Moreover, earlier entrance was in south direction, in present day it is in south east direction. Additionly, garden area is reduced to build a room for minor operations. Furthermore, it has been observed that the room 1 and 2 for consultation is halted for 3 and 4. Whereas, room 3is changed into children's play area, while reception desk is also adjusted near the entrance. Nevertheless, seats are now more available than before in consulting room.

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now
is depicted
 by the map.

Overview, it is noticed
 that spectacular This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 has been made
 for consultation You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
, however
, the physiotherapy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 remain unchanged.

By analyzing the map it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that during 2005, parking space was for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 13 cars This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after modifications This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 it is for 30 cars. Moreover
, earlier entrance was in south direction, in present day it is in This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-eastsoutheast
south east
 direction. Possible spelling mistake found.AdditionAdditionalAdditionsAdditionallyAdditively
Additionly
, garden area is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to build a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 for minor operations.

Furthermore
, it has been observed
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 1 and 2 for consultation is halted
 for 3 and 4. Whereas, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 3is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 into children's play area, while reception desk is also
 adjusted near the entrance. Nevertheless
, seats are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 more available than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 in consulting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. 