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MAP COMPARISON OF TWO DIFFERENT PLACES

MAP COMPARISON OF TWO DIFFERENT PLACES yGrwE

The two maps depict the alteration happened in almost six Decades from 1950 till 2007. Overall, it can see that, there are some addition of new infrastructural elements and entities followed by some amelioration in transportation connectivity as the year passes. Moreover, some replacements and demolished platforms can also be figure out from the images. Firstly, in the initial year, the road is connected till the water body while in the latter year 2007, the sea not only exchanged to yacht marina but also transportation developed around the stationary water area. Secondly, in the north-west direction, previously there was only industrial area but as the time passed, some new structures can be sighted including Parks, Multi-storey car parking and swimming pool which is situated in contagious positions. Moving towards the south direction below the intersection of road, in the left side new Cinema is built-up while on the right side numerous houses were established over the barren grassland. Over the years, countless shops can also be seen which are designed nearby the road and some living apartments at the north-east direction are also newly constructed there.

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from 1950 till 2007
. Overall
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see
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some
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some
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year
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some
 replacements and demolished platforms can also
 be figure out from the images.

Firstly
, in the initial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, the road is connected
 till the water body while in the latter You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 2007, the sea not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
also
 transportation developed around the stationary water area. Secondly
, in the north-west direction, previously there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 industrial area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as the time passed, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new structures can be sighted
 including Parks, Possible spelling mistake found.Multistory
Multi-storey
 car parking and swimming pool which is situated
 in contagious positions.

Moving towards the south direction below the intersection of road, in the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side new Cinema is built
-up while on the right side numerous This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
were established
 over the barren grassland. Over the years, countless shops can also
 be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 which are designed
 nearby the road and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 living apartments at the north-east direction are also
newly
 constructed there. 