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Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004

Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004 o87wq
The provided table enumerates the percentage of men, women and their average who can read and write by five different parts of the world and worldwide throughout the period from 2000 to 2004. In general, what stands out from the table is that there were clear regional differences in the number of literate people. Europe and Americas got the highest literacy rate, whereas Africa was considerably lower in elementary knowledge ratio.
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different
parts of the world and worldwide throughout the period from 2000 to 2004.
In general
, what stands out from the table is that there were
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clear
regional differences in the number of literate
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people
. Europe and Americas
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got
the highest literacy rate, whereas Africa was
considerably
lower in elementary knowledge ratio.
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IELTS academic Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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