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Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004

Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004 o87wq

The provided table enumerates the percentage of men, women and their average who can read and write by five different parts of the world and worldwide throughout the period from 2000 to 2004. In general, what stands out from the table is that there were clear regional differences in the number of literate people. Europe and Americas got the highest literacy rate, whereas Africa was considerably lower in elementary knowledge ratio.

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 parts of the world and worldwide throughout the period from 2000 to 2004. In general
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 the highest literacy rate, whereas Africa was considerably
 lower in elementary knowledge ratio. 

IELTS academic Literacy rates by region and gender for 2000-2004

Academic

American English

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 7.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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