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Bar Diagram for Australian Population

Bar Diagram for Australian Population mLPd1

The given bar diagram visualises the data for Australian men and women of various age groups who regularly did some kinds of regular workouts for the year 2010. From the bar chart, we can analyse that nearly half the half the Australian population follows an inactive or a sedentary lifestyle. Surprisingly, the senior citizens in Australia too are following a health lifestyle with around 46 % of males and 47 % of females falling under the age group of 65 and above. We observe a gradual decrease in the ratio of excerising males from the age groups of 15 to 24 till 35 to 44. On the contrary, the famale participation in regular workouts is increasing and gets almost saturated near 53% from the age group of 15 till 54. The average percentage of excercising males comes to around 45. 3%, while that of females it comes to around 55%.

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