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map between 1969 and 2001

map between 1969 and 2001 5BbWn
The pictures depict the transformation of Felixstowe within 34 years, starting from 1967. Overall, the city underwent several changes, the most important of which are the construction and redevelopment of some sites to cater to the tourism industry. In the north part, while there was no change done to the golf course at the northwest corner, the farmland at the northeast was removed to make way for a hotel complex accompanied by the amenities like a swimming pool and two tennis courts. In addition, in the middle of the northern section, the shops on the right of High street were expanded, whereas those on the left-hand side were converted into apartments for accommodation. Regarding the south side of the city, wind turbines had been erected on the sandy beach near the dunes on the west wing to provide green power for the grid by 2001. The hotel right next to it was redeveloped with a large car park. While the cafe remained, the marina, the pier, and the fish market were turned into the public beach and the private beach, which was exclusive to the customers using the service of the hotel opposite.
The pictures depict the transformation of
Felixstowe
within 34 years, starting from 1967.

Overall
, the city underwent several
changes
, the most
important
of which are the construction and redevelopment of
some
sites to cater to the tourism industry.

In the north part, while there was no
change
done to the golf course at the northwest corner, the farmland at the northeast
was removed
to
make
way for a hotel complex accompanied by the amenities like a swimming pool and two tennis courts.
In addition
, in the middle of the northern section, the shops on the right of High street
were expanded
, whereas those on the
left
-hand side
were converted
into apartments for accommodation.

Regarding the south side of the city, wind turbines had
been erected
on the sandy beach near the dunes on the west wing to provide green power for the grid by 2001. The hotel right
next
to it
was redeveloped
with a large car park. While the
cafe
remained, the marina, the pier, and the fish market
were turned
into the public beach and the private beach, which was exclusive to the customers using the service of the hotel opposite.
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IELTS academic map between 1969 and 2001

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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