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CHART EXPLAIN ABOUT PEOPE IN USA ATE FAST FOOD IN 2003 2006 AND 2013

CHART EXPLAIN ABOUT PEOPE IN USA ATE FAST FOOD IN 2003 2006 AND 2013 2Klrk

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IELTS academic CHART EXPLAIN ABOUT PEOPE IN USA ATE FAST FOOD IN 2003 2006 AND 2013

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

100 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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