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Given is the map providing information about the front zone of an Australian beach in 1950 and the present day. It is explicitly observed from the diagram that the area has been more recreational and convenient with the introduction and expansion of certain facilities. To begin with, the main road has experienced an extension from the original car park to the lighthouse; as a result, the playground close to the main street was replaced by another place for parking. However, the pavilion and dining tables remain significantly the same throughout the period. The most notable changes were the additions of a restaurant and two clubs. Particularly, one surfing club is placed nearby the lighthouse in the Eastern section of the area; whereas, the other lying next to the restaurant on the opposite side. Furthermore, the left-handed swimming pool had been doubled in size while stability was witnessed in the right-handed one.
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Given
is the map providing information about the front zone of an Australian beach in 1950 and the present day.

It is
explicitly
observed from the diagram that the area has been more recreational and convenient with the introduction and expansion of certain facilities.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the main road has experienced an extension from the original car park to the lighthouse;
as a result
, the playground close to the main street
was replaced
by another place for parking.
However
, the pavilion and dining tables remain
significantly
the same throughout the period.

The most notable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
were the additions of a restaurant and two clubs.
Particularly
, one surfing club
is placed
nearby the lighthouse in the Eastern section of the area; whereas, the other lying
next
to the restaurant on the opposite side.
Furthermore
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
-handed swimming pool had
been doubled
in size while stability
was witnessed
in the right-handed one.
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IELTS academic map about front area of beach

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
7.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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