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The pie chart describes the comparison of different types of energy produced in 1995 and 2005 in France. Overall, the production of gas is the more relevant for both periods and remained almost the same whereas other less important sources of energy in 1995, like nuclear and others, increased their production over the time. Gas and coal were the first and second more important source of energy, respectively, and represented aproximately the 60% of total energy production. Both gas and coal had a slight increase of more o less 1% from 1995 and 2005. On the other hand, petrol production had an important fall of about 10% but still remained the third in relavance. Finally, other sources of energy became more important in a ten years span: nuclaer energy jumped from 6. 4% to 10. 1%, and other from 4. 9% to 9. 10%.
The pie chart
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describes
the comparison of
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different
types of
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energy
produced in 1995 and 2005 in France.

Overall
, the
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production
of gas is the more relevant for both periods and remained almost the same whereas
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other
less
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important
sources of
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energy
in 1995, like nuclear
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and others
, increased their
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production
over the time.

Gas and coal were the
first
and second more
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important
source of
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energy
,
respectively
, and represented
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aproximately
the 60% of total
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energy
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production
. Both gas and coal had a slight increase of more o less 1%
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from 1995 and 2005
.

On the
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other
hand, petrol
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production
had an
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important
fall of about 10%
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but
still
remained the third in
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relavance
.
Finally
,
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other
sources of
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energy
became more
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important
in a ten years span:
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nuclaer
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jumped from 6. 4% to 10. 1%, and
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other
from 4. 9% to 9. 10%.
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IELTS academic comparison of different types of energy production

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