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male and female arrests over 5 years and the reasons

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The charts (pie and bar chart) describes the combined proportion of arrests for females and males from 1989 to 1994, and the most common reasons for them. Overall, men represent the 32% of total arrests whilts women the 9%. Public drinking was the reason why both men and women was arrested the most, with nearly 37. 5% and 30% respectively. For men, drink driving was the second cause of arrests with 25% of the given data. Other reasons, like breach of order, assault and thef are more o less in the same percentage, above 10% but not more than 18%. On the other hand, women’s assault represented the most popular cause after public drinking and representing about the 19%. Drink driving was slightly over thef with aproximately the 14%, while theft and and breach of order are around 12-12% of the information analyzed.
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the combined proportion of arrests for females and males from 1989 to 1994, and the most common reasons for them.

Overall
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men
represent the 32% of total arrests
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women the 9%. Public drinking was the reason why both
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was arrested
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37. 5% and 30%
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was the second cause of arrests with 25% of the
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data. Other reasons, like breach of order, assault and
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more o less in the same percentage, above 10%
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not more than 18%.

On the other hand
, women’s assault represented the most popular cause after public drinking and representing about the 19%.
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Drink driving
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breach of order are around 12-12% of the information analyzed.

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