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Many people believed that sports lessons are important in school time. So table both boys and girls should participate. do you agree and disagree.

Many people believed that sports lessons are important in school time. So table both boys and girls should participate. do you agree and disagree. PgQ0p
Lots of individuals think that sports lessons are essential in school paried. So table male and female should participate. This essay will articulated my opinion in subsequent paragraphs. To begin with, Most of learning institutions ought to include sports facilities as it can be enhanced physical development of children. This is because adolescen tend to live sedentary lifestyle, therefore they have monotonous routines in their academics. If students do not play sports games, they would face serious consequences such asDepression and suffer from obesity. for instance, In Australia schools are providing sports amenities mandatory, as a consequence, the problem of obesity has reduced 55%. On the flip side, moreover, the purpose of a school education is not only to teach certain subject to students but also to promote their overall development. Along with an informed and knowledgeable mind, students need a strong body so that they can carry-out daily tasks effectively and efficiently. A intustry report has recently confirmed that physically strong employees are able to work for longer hours without any distraction of body pain. Consequently, various companies prefer hiring people who indulge in sports. To make today' children better employees in the future, school need to inculcate the habit of playing sports. In conclusion, if we want a society with robust and responsible citizens who can make better decisions and contribute to economic development, school will have to invest in sports infrastructure and motivate all students to participate in one physical activity or another. This will make our society stronger and sustainable.
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facilities as it can
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physical development of children. This is
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adolescen tend
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sedentary lifestyle,
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they have monotonous routines in their academics. If
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do not play
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games, they would face serious consequences such
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asDepression
and suffer from obesity.
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for
instance, In Australia
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schools
are providing
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amenities mandatory, as a consequence, the problem of obesity has
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reduced
55%. On the flip side,
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education is not
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students
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overall
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need a strong body
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that they can carry-out daily tasks
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report has recently confirmed that
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strong employees are able to work for longer hours without any distraction of body pain.
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, various
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companies
prefer hiring
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people
who indulge in
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sports
. To
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make
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today
' children better employees in the future,
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school
need to inculcate the habit of playing
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sports
.
In conclusion
, if we want a society with robust and responsible citizens who can
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make
better decisions and contribute to economic development,
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school
will
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invest in
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infrastructure and motivate all
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students
to participate in one physical activity or another. This will
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make
our society stronger and sustainable.

IELTS academic Many people believed that sports lessons are important in school time. So table both boys and girls should participate. do you agree and disagree.

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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