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Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more beneficial both environmentally and economically.

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more beneficial both environmentally and economically. 0E9NQ
The given chart illustrates the process of oil removal from avocado. Overall, it requires six stages to turn the avocado into a pure oil form. Additionally, it takes another four steps to manage the wastages of the entire process. First and foremost, a significant amount of avocado fruit is collected and dumped into the machine to begin the process. A group of labours scrutinize the fruits intensively and throw them away if any gets rotten. Washing thoroughly is the following procedure that prepares the ingredients for crushing in another section of the factory. Furthermore, the blended objects go through a conduit to an extensive filter. The ingredients get separated into two parts: hard and liquid and oil and water. All the things are thrown away as trash except the oil, which run through another filter to dispense after purification. Nevertheless, the factory contributes to the environment by turning its wastes into natural compost. To complete this agenda, a microbus collects trash from each section and dumps those into a nearby orchard garden.
The
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given
chart illustrates the process of
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oil
removal from avocado.

Overall
, it requires six stages to turn the avocado into a pure
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oil
form.
Additionally
, it takes another four steps to manage the
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wastages
of the entire process.

First
and foremost, a significant amount of avocado fruit
is collected
and dumped into the machine to
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begin
the process. A group of
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labours
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scrutinize
the fruits
intensively
and throw them away if any
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gets
rotten. Washing
thoroughly
is the following procedure that prepares the ingredients for crushing in another section of the factory.

Furthermore
, the blended objects go through a conduit to an extensive filter. The ingredients
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get
separated into two parts:
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hard
and liquid and
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oil
and water. All the things
are thrown
away as trash except the
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oil
, which run through another filter to dispense after purification.

Nevertheless
, the factory contributes to the environment by turning its wastes into natural compost. To complete this agenda, a
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microbus
collects trash from each section and dumps those into a nearby orchard garden.

IELTS academic Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more beneficial both environmentally and economically.

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