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Manufacturing of Wave Energy Machine

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The below diagram illustrates about the manufacturing of the wave energy machine and provided the locations to construct it which depends on the cost and the place it is built Overall, the waves produced by the machine output is high when it is installed inside the water as there are larger waves that hit the machine and it consumes to produce the energy compared to the machines installed at land side We can distinguish the machine into two parts vertically and horizontally called as parts and chambers respectively. The left side of the part consists of two turbines which are at the top of the machine and is separated by a door, and the turbines rotate throughout the process to produce energy with a electricity generator. However, The below chamber is open, so that the wave forces the water to enter, producing the air to move up. The air hits the turbine and passes out of the free space left, at top right part contributing the energy produced
The below diagram illustrates about the manufacturing of the
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wave
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energy
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machine
and provided the locations to construct it which depends on the cost and the place it
is built


Overall
, the
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waves
produced by the
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machine
output is high when it
is installed
inside the water as there are larger
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waves
that hit the
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machine
and it consumes to produce the
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energy
compared to the
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machines
installed at land side

We can distinguish the
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machine
into two
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parts
vertically
and
horizontally
called as
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parts
and chambers
respectively
. The
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left
side of the
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part
consists of two turbines which are at the top of the
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machine
and
is separated
by a door, and the turbines rotate throughout the process to produce
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energy
with
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a
electricity generator.
However
, The below chamber is open,
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so
that the
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wave
forces the water to enter, producing the air to
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move
up. The air hits the turbine and passes out of the free space
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left
, at top right
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part
contributing the
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energy
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produced
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IELTS academic Manufacturing of Wave Energy Machine

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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