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The table gives information about the average hours spend per week in front of computer (for internet surfing, playing games or business purposes) by peole of different age groups in China. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information about the average hours spend per week in front of computer (for internet surfing, playing games or business purposes) by peole of different age groups in China. n6wKe

The tabular chat reveals the information about, distinct age groups of individuals are spending average hours in the front of desktop in China Now turning to the details, men who are under 10 to 15 age groups they are spending 10 hours in the front of laptop and same age groups of female take total 8 hours for internet surfing or playing games. However it is quite surprising that, youngsters are spending more time on computer, approximately 23 to 24 hours, further when pupils are coming in adult age near 21 to 25, they are taking 10 to 12 hours on computer for playing games or business purposes. On the other hand, the most striking point to be observed is that, men and women who are under 30, they are spending total 9 hours in the front of desktop. After, when individuals are coming near 50 or above 50+ age they are taking 7 to 9 hours for social networking or any business purposes in China. After considering all the facts and figures, it is obvious clear that adult age groups are spending more time on computer and older masses who are over 50+, they choose immensely tiny hours to use laptop.

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