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Life has been changing dramaticly since a while in many areas of our life

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Life has been changing dramaticly since a while in many areas of our life, and the social rules relationship with the young people one of these areas. Some people might argue that rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are to strict, some people might disagree with that. It depends on the lence through which one is looking. As far as I am concern, I disagree with the statement. I feel this way because low protection and right protection. To start with, low protection. No one can deney that there is a regulation that protect the young people from practicing thier freedome. Now more than before, youth have the ability to choose what to do whithout any enforcment in term in social rules. For example, my parents were forcing me to wear my Hijab while I was young, and they were using our societies rules as an excuse. On the contrary, now, I have removed my Hijab and they could not do anything because there is laws that protect my personal choices. Unlike my ante, she tried to remove her Hijab when she was at my age but she could not. She lived all her life forced to obey the societies rules. You can see from this example that the young people now are not expected to obey just becasue they have to. The other reason is the right protection. We live now in this contemprary age, that ever one knows his rights. Our children has been learning thier rights thought the school or even the internet. My personal opinion in this matter has been profoundly affected by my personal experiance. My son, when he was seven years old. He pushed the table a way when I told him to go to sleep. I was very angry and his mother I threatened him that I will hit him if he do that again, which I will never do, but it ws the same waay my mam used with me when I was at his age. He came near to me and look into my eyes and told me with confidence: it is my right not to be hit by any one.
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one of these areas.
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that societies
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to follow and obey are
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strict,
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might disagree with that. It depends on the
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low protection and
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protection.

To
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with, low protection. No one can
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from practicing
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, my parents were forcing me to wear my Hijab while I was
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, and they were using our societies
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rules
as an excuse.
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,
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, I have removed my
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Hijab and
they could not do anything
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there is laws
that protect my personal choices. Unlike my ante, she tried to remove her Hijab when she was at my age
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she could not. She
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all her life forced to obey the societies
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. You can
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from this example that the
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are not
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the school or even the internet. My personal opinion in this matter has been
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him to go to sleep. I was
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angry and his mother I threatened him that I will hit him if he
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IELTS academic Life has been changing dramaticly since a while in many areas of our life

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
365 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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