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Table chart Employment in California

Table chart Employment in California r8wpp

Past and future figures regarding the proportion of workers in seven sectors in the state of California are provided in the diagram. Overall, there will be a rise in the figures for health, services, and information technology, and a corresponding fall in government, manufacturing/agriculture, and low wage jobs while the business/administration rate is expected to remain stable. Between 2010 and 2020, the prediction is that the services and information technology sectors will have experienced a slight growth from 17% to 20% and 8% to 10% respectively. Similarly, health is projected to witness a doubling in its figure from 12% to just under a quarter with 23%. Noticeably, it will become the sector with the highest proportion of workers in 2020. On the other hand, the forecast is that there will be a slight decline in the percentage of workers in government (18% to 14%) and low wage jobs (24% to 16%). Manufacturing/agriculture accounted for the lowest figure in 2010 (8%), nevertheless, it is expected to have fallen even lower to just 4% in 2020. Finally, the only sector which is projected to experience no change is business/administration which will remain at 13%.

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