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Given below are the types of communications used in 1962 and in 1982.

Given below are the types of communications used in 1962 and in 1982. R2PkV
The various types of communication used in the year 1962 to 1982 to Sean in the pie diagrams. It can be seen that there were significant changes in each of the three media serveyed. The modes of communication were revolutionised with the great penetration of phones and computers. Both of them put together made the use of letters in significant. Letter writing which accounted for 50% of the total was the most popular form of communication in 1962. But by 1982, this figure drastically fell to just 10%, which is one fifth of the former the smallest of the figures of that year. On the contrary, the use of phones and computers during this same period rose dramatically. The telephone, rising from 35% to 60% became the favourite means of communication. Similarly, the use of computers doubled to 30%. To sum up, we can say that there was a rapid transformation in the modes of communication from 1962 to 1982.
The various types of
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in the year 1962 to 1982 to Sean in the pie diagrams. It can be
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seen
that there were significant
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changes
in each of the three media
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. The modes of
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were
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revolutionised
with the great penetration of phones and computers. Both of them put together made the
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use
of letters in significant. Letter writing which accounted for 50% of the total was the most popular form of
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communication
in 1962.
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drastically
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10%, which is one fifth of the former the smallest of the figures of that year.
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, the
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use
of phones and computers during this same period rose
dramatically
. The telephone, rising from 35% to 60% became the
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Similarly
, the
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of computers doubled to 30%. To sum up, we can say that there was a rapid transformation in the modes of
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communication
from 1962 to 1982.

IELTS academic Given below are the types of communications used in 1962 and in 1982.

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