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The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999. MMmB6
the line graph elucidates the information about a tourist from Britain between 1979 to 1999. although the bar graph depicts the renowned countries explored by UK residents in 1999. considering too, from 1979 to 1984. visits abroad by Uk residents reached 12 million to 20 million. Although, globalization tourists explored the UK started up to 10 million rose to 12 million in 1984. After stability in 1984, visits to the UK by overseas residents suddenly across close to 30 million in 1999. However, tourists from countries via UK residents rose to 20 million to 52 million in the annual period. On the other hand, Although, in the second bar graph, visitors from turkey, Greece, and the USA showed minor fluctuations below the 5 million tourists exploring in 1999. whilst the tourists who visited the most popular countries were Spanish and french people up to 10 million but rose up to 12 million visitors explored more than pain in an annual period. overall, both line and bar graph illustrate the fluctuation of overseas tourist through residents in the UK between the given year below.
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the
line
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graph
elucidates the information about a
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tourist
from Britain
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between 1979 to 1999
.
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although
the bar
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graph
depicts the renowned countries explored by UK
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residents
in 1999.

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considering
too, from 1979 to 1984.
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visits
abroad by
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Uk
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residents
reached 12
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million
to 20
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million
.
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Although
, globalization
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tourists
explored the UK
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started
up to 10
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million
rose to 12
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million
in 1984. After stability in 1984, visits to the UK by overseas
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residents
suddenly
across close to 30
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million
in 1999.
However
,
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tourists
from countries via UK
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residents
rose to 20
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million
to 52
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million
in the annual period.

On the other hand
, Although, in the second bar
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graph
, visitors from
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turkey
, Greece, and the USA
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showed
minor fluctuations below the 5
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million
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tourists
exploring in 1999.
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whilst
the
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tourists
who visited the most popular countries were Spanish and
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french
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people
up to 10
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million
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but
rose up to 12
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million
visitors explored more than pain in an annual period.

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overall
, both line and bar
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graph
illustrate the fluctuation of overseas
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tourist
through
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residents
in the UK between the
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given
year below.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
183 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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