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coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Discuss about this chart.

This graph represents a demand forecast of the audience in the five cities of Australia who buy and drink coffee and tea on a regular basis. The trends in the graph are divided into three sub-categories for those who either prefer fresh coffee, instant coffee, or directly visit a café for having a coffee or tea in the timeframe of last 4 weeks. It’s clear from the trends that the audience put more dollars into buying either coffee or tea and has a good demand throughout the five cities, however, the graph represents that the lowest buying behavior of fresh coffee is found to be in Brisbane and Adelaide with a difference of nearly 1% among both the cities. Whereas the highest buying behavior for the fresh coffee is found to be in Sydney at a rate of 43%. Moreover, it is found that the instant coffee has a moderate demand among the Australians in the five cities. Surprisingly, the highest demand is recorded for a coffee or tea which is ordered in a café in nearly all the four cities except Adelaide where the audience prefer instant coffee slightly more than visiting a café. Furthermore, the highest demand of coffee or a tea in the café was found to be nearly the same in Melbourne and Hobart altogether at a rate of 64% and 63% respectively.
This graph represents a
demand
forecast of the audience in the five
cities
of Australia who
buy
and drink
coffee
and
tea
on a regular basis. The trends in the graph
are divided
into three sub-categories for those who either prefer fresh
coffee
, instant
coffee
, or
directly
visit a café for having a
coffee
or
tea
in the timeframe of last 4 weeks.

It’s
clear
from the trends that the audience put more dollars into buying either
coffee
or
tea
and has a
good
demand
throughout the five
cities
,
however
, the graph represents that the lowest buying behavior of fresh
coffee
is
found
to be in Brisbane and Adelaide with a difference of
nearly
1% among both the
cities
. Whereas the highest buying behavior for the fresh
coffee
is
found
to be in Sydney at a rate of 43%.
Moreover
, it is
found
that the instant
coffee
has a moderate
demand
among the Australians in the five
cities
.
Surprisingly
, the highest
demand
is recorded
for a
coffee
or
tea
which
is ordered
in a café in
nearly
all the four
cities
except Adelaide where the audience
prefer
instant
coffee
slightly
more than visiting a café.
Furthermore
, the highest
demand
of
coffee
or a
tea
in the café was
found
to be
nearly
the same in Melbourne and Hobart altogether at a rate of 64% and 63%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Discuss about this chart.

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