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main reasons for teenagers in one African

main reasons for teenagers in one African 7WBGY
The chart demonstrates the reasons why teenagers use their phone from 2016 to 2019 in Africa. In general, social networks became the most prevalent reason in most year. For instance, in 2016, social networks topped the chart with 50% while using for email took up for 25%, followed by digital camera and phone calls bottoming the chart, revealing 15% and 10% respectively. Likewise, the chart in 2017 witnessed the similar pattern to the former whereas the reason for social networks slightly declined given that digital camera marginally increased. In the last two years, the utility phones for phone calls exponentially fell off nearly 2 times from 11% to 5%, which still stood at the bottom. Strikingly, the percentage youngsters use for digital camera was equally the same. Another striking feature is that the proportion of using for email decreased as time go by. Phone calls, paradoxically, experienced a soar from 50% to 56%.
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from 2016 to 2019 in Africa. In

general, social networks became the most prevalent reason in most year.

For instance
, in 2016, social networks topped the
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with 50% while using for email took up for 25%,

followed by digital camera and
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phone
calls bottoming the
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, revealing 15% and 10%
respectively
.

Likewise
, the
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in 2017 witnessed the similar pattern to the former whereas the reason for social

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networks
slightly
declined
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that digital camera
marginally
increased. In the last two years, the

utility
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phones
for
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phone
calls
exponentially
fell off
nearly
2 times from 11% to 5%, which
still
stood at

the bottom.

Strikingly
, the percentage youngsters
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use
for digital camera was
equally
the same. Another striking

feature is that the proportion of using for email decreased as time go by.
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Phone
calls,
paradoxically
,

experienced a soar from 50% to 56%.
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IELTS academic main reasons for teenagers in one African

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