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look at the map and describe the changes in the town of Huddersfield using the above words and phrases

look at the map and describe the changes in the town of Huddersfield using the above words and phrases 2rXXw
The map demonstrates how the town of Huddersfield changed over a period of 25 years. As can be seen from the map, there was a significant change in the town, especially the development of infrastructure and factories. From the images above, the town named Huddersfield was divided into two different areas by the river Alanah. To the north of the town, compared to 1980 and 2005, the trees were found to be cut down to make room for the park, the car park. and the lake in the east of the hospital, where the physical activities took place, was added to new sports in 2005. At the same time, the land near the railway where people made houses, was also converted into a place to build a stadium and a car park. To the south of the town, after 25 years, the woodland was found to be cut down to build the factories. the areas around the school experienced a construction of the warehouse and the factories. Besides, to the left of the railway, there was an erection of the factory with the introduction of the skyscrapers.
The map demonstrates how the
town
of Huddersfield
changed
over a period of 25 years.

As can be
seen
from the map, there was a significant
change
in the
town
,
especially
the development of infrastructure and factories.

From the images above, the
town
named Huddersfield
was divided
into two
different
areas by the river
Alanah
. To the north of the
town
, compared to 1980 and 2005, the trees
were found
to be
cut
down to
make
room for the park, the car park.
and
the lake in the east of the hospital, where the physical activities took place, was
added
to new sports in 2005. At the same time, the land near the railway where
people
made
houses
, was
also
converted into a place to build a stadium and a car park.

To the south of the
town
, after 25 years, the woodland
was found
to be
cut
down to build the factories.
the
areas around the school experienced a construction of the warehouse and the factories.
Besides
, to the
left
of the railway, there was an erection of the factory with the introduction of the skyscrapers.
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IELTS academic look at the map and describe the changes in the town of Huddersfield using the above words and phrases

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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