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llustrates and gives information about transformation of Westley town in 1815 and also current state of the town.

llustrates and gives information about transformation of Westley town in 1815 and also current state of the town. Wm5ON
The two maps illustrates and gives information about transformation of Westley town in 1815 and also current state of the town. Overall, Westley turned into much more residential and commercial area respect to old times. Moreover, clearly population increased, many building added into town and become urban area respect to past status, also many agricultural areas removed from the map. In 1815, there is a twin toll bridge on the Twine river, which is connects to London, Furthermore, there are many fields on the south west side of map with the road which is travel around to town and reaches up to Tinton village. Lord Wesley's house is the near of the Tinton village, which is means nort east side of the map and under of the Lord's house there are Lenton woods, lake Lenton. In addition south east of the map occupied with houses, town hall and market square with connection of road. The most noticeable additions are the new buildings and railway, that extends north to south and pass above from river, whereas bridge demolished from river. Furthermore, houses removed and turned into business and residential area also Lenton woods chopped down to set up Lenton housing estate.
The two
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illustrates and gives information about transformation of Westley
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in 1815 and
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current
state of the town.

Overall
, Westley turned into much more residential and commercial
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area
respect to
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old
times.
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,
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population increased,
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many
building
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added
into
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town
and become urban
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respect to past status,
also
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many
agricultural
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areas
removed from the map.

In 1815, there is a twin toll bridge on the Twine river, which is connects to London,
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, there are
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fields on the
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south west
side of
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with the road which is travel around to
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town
and reaches up to
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Tinton
village. Lord Wesley's
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is
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Tinton
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means nort
east side of the
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and under of the Lord's
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there are
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Lenton
woods, lake
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Lenton
. In
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addition
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south east
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occupied with
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,
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hall and market square with connection of road.

The most noticeable additions are the new buildings and railway, that extends north to south and pass above from river, whereas bridge demolished from river.
Furthermore
,
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removed and turned into business and residential
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also
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Lenton
woods chopped down to set up
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housing estate.
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