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the graph is that people between 18 and 25 years old are the ones who receive the least donations.

the graph is that people between 18 and 25 years old are the ones who receive the least donations. GNw6B

What we can see in the graph is that people between 18 and 25 years old are the ones who receive the least donations. In 1990 it was low but in 2010 it was too low, they received very few donations with 6% of donations. In 1990, people from 36 to 50 years of age received more donations than in 2010, the difference is a bit big, since in 1990 they received 43% and in 2010, 35% and in 2010, people from 51 to 65 years of age were the group that received the most donations compared to 1990, although the difference was not so great, with 39% in 2010 and 35% in 1990. In 2010 donations for people aged 36 to 50 had the same percentage for people> 65 years. In 1990 we can see that more donations were given than in 2010 in all categories, since less was donated in 2010.

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