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the pie chart shows information on the use of different transport in edmonton

the pie chart shows information on the use of different transport in edmonton gYD63

The pie chart depicts the details about uses of number of commuting vehicle in the Edmonton. Overall, the most popular vehicle in Edmonton is car, representing more then two fifth while the bus and taxi are the less popular among the city. To begin with, the highest transport mode use by the community is by car which is 45%. The second highest is LRT(light rail transit) which is 35%. Bus and taxi are the equally use transportation, which is 10%. The most preferable vehicle of the Edmonton is car. 45% of people are use to commute from car. further, the LRT is the second option to be chose by the people to travel and 10% travel is by both busses and taxies. At the end, it can seen that, the major transportation is doing by the personal vehicle and the rest is doing by the LRT, busses and by taxi.

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