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in percentage by age range between 1990 and 2010 of British people giving money to charities

in percentage by age range between 1990 and 2010 of British people giving money to charities D6NBm

In this graph analysis you will see the difference in percentage by age range between 1990 and 2010 of British people giving money to charities. Overall the cooperation has always been decent, and numerous people have always participated with the charities. However there has been a rise in people helping these charities in 2010 between the ages 51 and 65. Here are some comparisons between these 29 years; young people used to give a decent amount of money, but in the year 2010 it decreased a great deal, from having 15% to a 5%. With the adults we can see that in the year 1990 their cooperation was still preferable. Then we have that the peak of 2010 was at 39% with the senior citizens, ages around 50 and 60. So we can see that 1990 was always increasing and was superior to 2010 in most ages and most of the time.

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 giving money to charities.

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