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List provides the number of people visit in museum in the year before and after reconstruction. Summarize the information.

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The list illustrates the number of people visits the Ashdown museum in the year before and after reconstruction. Also, the reactions of visitors are summarised in two pie charts. Overall, the number of visitors after refurbishment is increased than before reconstruction. Also, the ratio of very pleased people enhanced significantly after repair works. However, the proportion of dissatisfied visitors reduced largely. Though there are very marginal changes in pleased and severely dissatisfied category, the number of people giving no feedback remains the same. The total number of visitors after refurbishment increased to 18000 then before reconstruction. In terms of satisfied people, there is a 132% increase in very contented category visitors. Moreover, the number of satisfied people before repair works are 30, which enhanced moderately up to 40 after refurbishment. On the other hand, there are 62. 5% of visitors reduction in displeased class after overhauling of the museum. Although the number of intensely discontented visitor is 10, which lessen to 5 after repair works, the people with no feedback remain unchanged (5).
The list illustrates the
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number
of
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people
visits the
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Ashdown
museum in the year
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before
and after reconstruction.
Also
, the reactions of
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visitors
are
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summarised
in two pie charts.

Overall
, the
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number
of
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visitors
after refurbishment
is increased
than
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before
reconstruction.
Also
, the ratio of
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very
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pleased
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people
enhanced
significantly
after repair works.
However
, the proportion of dissatisfied
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visitors
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reduced
largely
. Though there are
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very
marginal
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changes
in
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pleased
and
severely
dissatisfied category, the
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number
of
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people
giving no feedback remains the same.

The total
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number
of
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visitors
after refurbishment increased to 18000 then
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before
reconstruction. In terms of satisfied
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people
, there is a 132% increase in
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very
contented category
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visitors
.
Moreover
, the
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number
of satisfied
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people
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before
repair works are 30, which enhanced
moderately
up to 40 after refurbishment.

On the other hand
, there are 62. 5% of
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visitors
reduction in displeased
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class
after overhauling of the museum. Although the
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number
of
intensely
discontented
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visitor
is 10, which lessen to 5 after repair works, the
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people
with no feedback remain unchanged (5).
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IELTS academic List provides the number of people visit in museum in the year before and after reconstruction.

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173 words
6.0
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