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Graph gives information about technology that households in one us city used for watching television between 2004 and 2014

Graph gives information about technology that households in one us city used for watching television between 2004 and 2014 NN1m

The line graph compares four sectors in technology used for watching television over period of 10 years in one us city It is clear that the internet use increased sigifically from 10000 households to 190000 households in period of 2004 to 2014. where as the broadcast use is decreased about 80000 households in period of 10 years In 2004 the use of broadcast technology was about 90000 households. the cable use was about 85000 households, satellite use was 75000 while, there is less number of users for internet. There was graduall increase of internet over the years it increased from 10000 households users to 190000 households. By 2014, the internet and satellite use for watching television sigificantly increased but the cable and broadcast was decrease over period of 10 years

The line graph compares four sectors in technology This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for watching television over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 of 10 years in one us city

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 increased Possible spelling mistake found.significantlyspecificallysatiricallypacificallyinimically
sigifically
 from 10000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
 to 190000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 of 2004 to 2014. Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
 the broadcast This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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 about 80000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
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period
 of 10 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyears.years!years?years:years,years;
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In 2004 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
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 of broadcast technology was about 90000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
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 cable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 was about 85000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
, satellite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 was 75000 while, there is less number of users for internet.

There was Possible spelling mistake found.graduallygradualgradual l
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 increase of internet over the years it increased from 10000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
 users to 190000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withordinaryeveryday
households
. By 2014, the internet and satellite This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for watching television Possible spelling mistake found.significantly
sigificantly
 increased This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the cable and broadcast was decrease over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 of 10 Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphyears.years!years?years:years,years;
years