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the export values of five different products and the totals between 1997 and 2010.

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The table compares the export values of five different products and the totals between 1997 and 2010. Overall, the general trend of the values of these products was increased, except the clothing and manufacturing products. As can be seen, the values of metals products were the highest change with 122%, started at 2. 3 billion in 1997 and rose to 5. 1 billion in 2010. Follow a similar trend, the figure for the telecommunity products were the second-highest change about 61% with the value from 7. 9 billion to 12. 7 billion in 1997 to 2010 respectively. And the value of the equipment product was 10. 3 billion in 1990 and increased to 11. 6 billion, about 13% changes. On the contrary, the lowest change was the value of the manufacturing products with -27%, from 5. 5 billion in 1997 down to 4 billion in 2010. The value of the clothing was smaller with 6 billion at the start and then decreased to 5 billion at the end, in 2010. However, the changes in totals were increased 20% with 32 billion in 1997 and lifted to 38. 4 billion in 2010.
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IELTS academic the export values of five different products and the totals between 1997 and 2010.

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